
Thank you to all of the amazing writers who submitted to the WD 48-Hour Screenplay Throwdown: Summer ’21 contest!
Over 900 writers from around the world submitted their scripts to the contest, making the selection process for our Ten Finalist spots difficult, but also a blast! The WD Community is full of some incredible screenwriters!
We are honored to announce the Semi-Finalists and Ten Finalists of Screenplay Throwdown Summer ’21:
SEMI-FINALISTS
(Top 5% of Scripts Submitted)
The Un-Terminatable Turner – Mario Gonzalez
Pencing – Jimwell Camilon
AMOUR – Gentian Gjikopulli
Yolanda’s Story – Gianna Ragogna
FOR I HAVE SINNED – Priyansh Lamba & Rishabh Bhagat
High School Sweetheart – Yoran Praet
Did You Get My Text? – Julien Perez & Mike Rowland
Agent Cherry: Case 36, The Lizard in the Diner – Theodora “Teddy” Udsholt-Clayton
The Undertakers – Lucy Gibb-Smith
The Man of Graphite – Divyansh Kulshrestha
The Alley Cats – Jameson P. Murray
Gone Rogue – Ted & Aidan Parkes
OSIRIS – Steve Duenes
THE SOCK – Nick Nordstrom
Faulkner’s Mantis – Philip Lemon
ANYTHING TO DECLARE – Aaron Ducker
R.S.M – Samantha Moody
Safety Measures – Jen Diamond
Aftermath – Malcolm Gari Love Owens
The Pencil Case – Naomi Clarke
GNAW – Natasha Williamson
Star-Crossed Lovers – Janine Zaruski
I Am Enough – Trusha Navalkar
Hysterics – Allison Slice
The Tortured Toreador – TJ Jaeger
Creola Park Drive – Reuben Smart
Just A Contractor – Grace Jiang
MOMMY DEAREST – Cody James & Mark Gonzales
The Local Lead Dealer – Ryan Chiu
Off The Record – Lukas Santus
Nine to Five – Quinn Hansen
ANACHRONISM – Amy Bauer
The Target – Amy Csaki
The Last Line – Dylan Patrick Morley
Lucky’s – Jerry Marchenkowsky
The Prodigious Pair – Fennell Harris
INOCULATION – Himmler Lorissaint
No.2 – A. Mercer
The Sales Lead – Dylan Gonzalez
They’ll Never Know – Stephen Yu
Wednesday – Honey Goudard & Anthony J. Lenzo
2B or Not 2B – Curtis Mutter
Mr. Goodbar’s Secret – Brian P. Gross
Identification Please – Siddhartha Verma
THE TEN FINALISTS (+1)
- MY NAME ISN’T GRANDPA – Amanda V. Cabral
- I KNOW WHERE THE BODIES ARE BURIED – Max Hallam
- Vigorously Average – Alexandra Keister
- Advanced Makeup Application Techniques – Rhys Kroehler
- Junior High Stakes – Lewis Mackie
- CULLER – Melanie McCoy
- POLYGRAPH – Mitchell LeBlanc
- THIS MACHINE SURROUNDS HATE – Jennifer Ramsey
- AFTER-SCHOOL CLUB – Murphy Rhodes
- Blind Date – Annie Sudler
- EXAM – Jay Wright
THE 1ST PLACE WINNER
Junior High Stakes – Lewis Mackie

“Junior High Stakes gets high marks for not only embracing the theme of secret identities but also using the pencil as the linchpin of the whole cat-and-mouse game. The use of grizzled male voice-overs as the inner monologues for 7th-grade girls was absolutely inspired. Great fun scene that tickled me throughout.”
Andy Bobrow
Featured Judge
Which Finalist script was your favorite? Let us know in the comments below!
Wrote a script for the Screenplay Throwdown? Post your script’s publish link in the comments!
WHY 11 FINALISTS?
It has been brought to our attention that one of our Finalist scripts did not follow the Submission Guidelines fully, using more than 2 speaking characters.
We apologize for this oversight and really appreciate our writers’ patience!
As a very small team reading a large number of scripts, we worked hard to avoid making mistakes but missed the mark on this one.
In response to this, the WD Team has decided to include an additional Finalist to the list!

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Hey guys,
I’ve been reading some the work from the finalists and choosing a winner isn’t going to be an easy task. Although I wasn’t chosen, I would like to share my submission with you all in hopes to gain some feedback and critiques. Good luck to the remanding ten!
https://read.writerduet.com/J3CUKUYQZKDCXWEA/da51a121-b0e9-4d9d-9ac6-197e14b99ba0
Hi Keijuan. I entered a script as well; didn’t make the semis. What you’ve written is more of a scene than an actual story. Plus, I don’t think there was enough of a twist. you have good characters and good dialogue (something I have trouble with) so I urge you to keep writing.
Hey guys. I wrote a script for the competition. I didn’t even make Semi finalist. But it would mean the world if my peers read it. Thanks for the opportunity. https://read.writerduet.com/nPERCu90iYNB7JNkTFTPNvVdE1K2/f071856f-e08c-4ab9-abd2-90b0af7131a8
Wow! These are just too good. My favorite is “I Know Where the Bodies are Buried”, closely followed by “Junior High Stakes”. I also find the dialogue in Alexandra’s story to be really good, especially the line, “You’re so average, Eugene, and you have no idea. The luxury to be so.”
I also liked “My Name isn’t Grandpa”. I think it stands out from the rest in that there is no violence.
Overall, good stories, very good, with unanticipated plot twists and interesting characters. While I have my favorites, I wouldn’t want to have to choose the “winning story”.
Appreciated!
How do the other participants get feedback on their scripts?
Thanks so much for the contest! Here’s my submission for anyone looking for a read, and I would totally love some feedback if you have any 🙂
https://read.writerduet.com/1yJoVDlvRkaFL4SYXmkLLn0QtOm2/8b4f363d-30a9-4b28-984e-7a247d361a2d
MY NAME ISN’T GRANDPA – Amanda V. Cabral and Blind Date – Annie Sudler so far!! all the writing is great. Director in Tokyo. Ron
Congrats to all the Finalists!
Aha! At this rate, Don’t think I’ll ever be a great writer.
“EXAM” was dope.
Don’t lose hope. I’ve learned that every story doesn’t necessarily appeal to everyone. Doesn’t mean it’s not good it means the person reading it didn’t catch your vision.
Because I read a lot of stories on Reddit and they didn’t make it on the list here.
Excellent scripts. I read there was a reddit thread for sharing scripts. Looking forward to the next.
Here is my entry if anyone is interested. https://www.facebook.com/phil.lemon.film/posts/1178601435915328
I liked “After School Club” the best. It was engaging, wanted to know more each step of the way. Great Job. https://read.writerduet.com/x7Lu130Fp7WoUfqBmbPVhcRkbQm1/104c40d3-d5b1-46dd-88c2-5c3e716c2640
Thank you! That means a lot!
The Tutor.pdf

There is no way my script was passed over. It was TOO brilliant (humbly I admit it). So it somehow got lost in the shuffle. If you read it, you will agree! I should be the winner!! Teehee.
Enjoy it!
Ooops. Here’s the link to mine:
https://read.writerduet.com/PXC6W2WBT48NC3M5/bcadfef9-8c7a-43b6-b25d-5f2523b5293e
Mr. Stringham! That was quite the rollercoaster. I’m sitting here in my living room laughing about a deceptive baby, femme fatale, and talking chipmunk trio! Gosh, you might just be a mastermind.
Since you’re quite the writer yourself, I challenge you to read my submission. One might be so brazen to say that it’s as fantastic as yours…
https://read.writerduet.com/1yJoVDlvRkaFL4SYXmkLLn0QtOm2/8b4f363d-30a9-4b28-984e-7a247d361a2d
I’m very interested in knowing what you have to say!
@JuliaModestino
Insanity is a good word here. I like your writing style.
A couple of notes:
If you have ellipses with a space after them
(… ), you don’t need to write (beat).
It ended too soon for me. What was Mr Boshnick’s motivation for taunting his employee?
And then, why was he sorry that he stabbed him if he and his wife were having an affair?
More details please.
In my mind, because he showed up at first as an entity, I thought that maybe they were both the same person (think Fight Club). But I didn’t get that closure.
Thank you for reading my script. That means a lot to me. And if you would like to collaborate more in the future, let me know.
This was a fun competition, though, I still don’t believe that everyone was given a fair shake (me me me meeeeee).
Plus I noticed that some of the finalists did NOT have scripts that fit into the parameters (one of them had THREE characters with dialogue though the max was supposed to be two). Sorry, don’t get me going…I’m not a big believer in the fairness of competitions!!
Anyway, tell me more about your script…I’m “dying” to know!
Can’t believe I made the top ten, I’m absolutely buzzing! Thank you!
I’ve been reading some the work from the finalists and choosing a winner isn’t going to be an easy task. Although I wasn’t chosen, I would like to share my submission with you all in hopes to gain some feedback and critiques. Good luck to the remaining ten!
https://read.writerduet.com/J3CUKUYQZKDCXWEA/da51a121-b0e9-4d9d-9ac6-197e14b99ba0
I love the banter between your characters, KeiJuan. Their personalities really came through! I think there was a moment or two when you made a grammar mistake, or maybe just missed a key on your keyboard. I thought the dialogue flowed well, and you definitely hit the mark with the prop and the theme. The plot was clear, but I didn’t find it entirely engaging myself. It’s definitely difficult to flush out an entire story with four pages and forty-eight hours. For me, although it felt slightly repetitive, the dialogue and solid characters really made up for it!
If you’re up to read mine (since I’m so starved for feedback), here it is!
https://read.writerduet.com/1yJoVDlvRkaFL4SYXmkLLn0QtOm2/d5ea5b52-b9ba-40ca-93e2-4e065141f64e
Broken link^ Here’s a better one:
https://read.writerduet.com/1yJoVDlvRkaFL4SYXmkLLn0QtOm2/8b4f363d-30a9-4b28-984e-7a247d361a2d
My favorite scripts are definitely ‘Exam’ and ‘My Name Isn’t Grandpa.’ Wonderful writing. Here’s my script for anyone who might be interested. Unfortunately I didn’t make semi-finalist or finalist, but I’m still very proud of it.
https://read.writerduet.com/sj8hjvMYqUPeT1s5EFBloOiWwuP2/4aec1afc-e553-4552-a385-b48ae4463c04
Love the entries here and congrats to everyone who made it to this point, well done 🙂
Here is my own entry for anyone who may want to read it and provide feedback:
https://read.writerduet.com/FU6SZNDZKZPCW5RE/90ea38b8-5b11-4377-b36c-86261d318ea0
Good luck to the finalists and thank you for this opportunity 🙂
I love this contest. I hope they have many more.
Fantastic entries! Loved all of them. Here’s my work (a period piece set during the Sri Lankan civil war). Would love some feedback:
https://read.writerduet.com/w5moEIJXYDPSLvAB0awFFlf3xJ02/66ca6856-1b74-4134-be22-7032d0e8338b
I’m kind of partial to “Exam” by Jay Wright! (Of course, he is my co-writer on our crime feature “Kings of Mississippi”!). But admit it…you laughed out loud, didn’t you?
I really enjoy the ones with unexpected plot twists like “Makeup,” “Junior High,” and “Polygraph.” Here’s my script if you’re interested. It’s called “Viral Video.”
Not sure if I pasted the link correctly for “Viral Video.” Here it is again…
Excellent stories !! congratulations and good luck to the finalists!
I did not manage to classify the finalists, but here is my script and it would be an honor for me to read it and give me your criticism.
Thanks !
Sebastian Gil
https://read.writerduet.com/8nfhViEBxINPgDKNSLjf5Y4wAW33/727337a3-fdf6-41a4-95f2-7fef17d505b8